Share Your Cover Letter
Guys,
Just a thought:
What if you had someone look at your documents before you send them away? Or help someone else with theirs?
In the spirit of landing a hand how about you copy and paste your cover letter and have other users critique it with the aim of making sure that you cover all the basics of career building.
So, here are the rules:
- delete any personal information from your cover letter and paste it in the comments field below.
- If you feel there is something needs improvement in someone’s cover letter PLEASE highlight it politely.
Over to you.
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My name is ****, ** years of age and a degree holder in bcom financial management from the University of Pretoria 2012. I am applying for *****internship. I was informed of this position by http://www.puffandpass.com.
I am knowledgeable in financial accounting, cost management, Microsoft office, pastel accounting and business management, all of which are skills afforded to me by my degree; skills I believe will make me a fitting candidate for this job. I am fluent in English and Sesotho.
I am a well rounded individual who works well alone and in teams, decisive and work with precision and in a timely fashion. I function on professional modesty and exercise ambition on company’s behalf and as well as towards my personal growth.
Thank you for considering me , I can be best contacted by cell phone. I look forward to hearing from you and possibly discussing employment.
Kind regards
Kgomotso Mashike
If the cover letter is meant to attract potential employers, does that mean that we do not have to write about our skills in the CV sine everything has been stated in the cover letter?
Hy gayz plz help me, I wnt to know the different between application letter and covering letter and hw to write it plz help
please Guys can i send my best cover letter which impressed my current employer?
thx guys for helping us on writing cover letters pls keep t up t is really helpfull
Please can anyone help wright application letter for learnership
The post title says, “Share Your Cover Letter”. So, please write your own and if you aren’t confident about it then share it here for others to critique.
***** ********
Tembisa
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APPLICATION FOR EMLOYMENT
I write this in hope of securing an employment at your company(you can name the company) . I was employed by ******** company as a **********, and am currently busy with my Civil Engineering studies (National Diploma in CIVIL ENGINEERING).I would greatly appreciate it if you would grant me an opportunity in your organization.
I am a young lady of 27 years; I am a hard working individual who does not need motivation to focus on her work. I am dynamic and versatile individual who does not shy away from new challenges. I am a woman who believes in high level of professionalism who always put client’s interest first. This company is of interest to me as it will bring a transformed and an elevated challenge.
I believe in perseverance, I like challenges, I also like exploring new things and I do not give up easily because it is how I improve my abilities and my performance and I believe that with my theoretical knowledge from UNISA, and the experience I gained at ******* company and my ambition to succeed in life in a long run I could be an asset for your company if given a chance.
I have attached my curriculum vitae for references.
I am available for an interview any time, my contact:
********/*********
******@*****.com
Thank you for considering my application. I am looking forward to your response.
Yours faithfully
*******
THIS COVER LETTER IS SO AMAZING
That i so Good…… If i had a company i wouldnt think twice to hire you.
can you please help me on writing a motivational letter for inservice-training please……
My name is ********* and I’ve just completed my National Diploma in IT. I wish to apply for the IT Internship posted on the Internet. During the past three years I have been studying IT in all aspects and now I would like to engage myself in the workplace as a Data Analyst, Developer and Consultant/Technician so as to learn the practical aspects and further increase my knowledge and the knowledge of your company, my career objectives are to study and explore the evolving world of IT and help come up with systems that will further assist in making life easy for humanity. I believe I will be an outstanding candidate as I am capable of employing myself to whatever job I’m given, I support good work ethics, I have good communication skills and I am very punctual when it comes to work related issues (meeting, deadlines, etc).I can adapt to any situation so as to acquire my desired goal. I can analyze a situation and come up with a solution at a short time period.
In 2011 I was working on a final year project for building a Point of Sale (POS) for a company named **** and I was the Project manager. I had to co-ordinate everything, JRP’s, Interviews and so forth. At the current state, begging of 2012 I was working as a technician at a municipality in Free State which ends on the on ******; I was appointed to create a website and in 3 months was moved up to take the role of supervisor in all IT related categories. I have worked as a help desk and support technician for applications like Munsoft, Sebata, VIP payroll, and Contour Devices and software.
im strugling too on how to right a cover letter but i think ur cover letter is good
i am still strugling to choose de best cover letter plz help me. Am a post graduate finished my B-tech of Labour Relations last year.
You’re supposed to write your own…
Dear ****
Application for *********
I Name and Surname am interested in applying for the ******, which is listed on ************ accessed on 2013-02-05.
I am self driven, young and vibrant, willing to go the extra mile, trustworthy and I put a lot of hard work into everything I do. I am a 2012 Information Technology graduate from CTI Education Group, where I was studying for a BSC Computer Systems (Herriot Watt University) (3years). I am proud to say that in my time of studies I have obtained very strong marks.
I am a part-time student at Torque-I.T in Pretoria, Where I am studying MCDBA. I wish to be involved in any kind of learning programme that will enable me to gain experience in the I.T field. However I do not have any relevant working experience thus yet, but I plan to learn as much as I can.
I am confident that I can be an active and fast learner in this learning experience. I would love the opportunity to become an employee in your company and pursue my desire of developing a career. I have attached a copy of my C.V and Transcript.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to talking to you soon.
Dear Sir/Madam
I’m a 25 year old ambitious lady from pretoria.
I’m studying Mechanical Engineering as a Fitter and Turner (a person who manufactures metal components and assembles them to construct industrial machinery ) with Tshwane South College,
I have keen interest in the MECHENICAL ENGINEERING industry, passionate about making a machinery and making a contribution to raise the skills level and committed to delivering training excellence , self-motivated, well organised and able to work with minimal supervision, i am professional and attuned to confidentiality issues, i am able to work well with others as a team player in a cooperative environment.
I am also good in managing multiple tasks and managing multiple priorities.
I don’t have any training experience as I’m still busy finishing my studies,as I’m left with two subjects to complete my N6, I will appreciate it if you give me a chance to train with your company,even as a volunteer .
I’m very dedicated individual, cope very well under pressure and i
know what i want in life.
I will not disappoint you.
I am really looking forward to hearing from you soon.(This are my no.s )
The Attached is my curriculum vitae.
Thank you in advance.
Hi,my name is jeff,i’ve jus get a post of learnership at absa for bankseta which will commence on 1 february 2013 to 31 january 2014,but im askin myself a lot of questions which are,does people get permanet post after doing the learnership or does they have to start from scratch to apply for permanet job.help me with your minds.
I would like to say thank you to everyone who took their time to help people like me who didn’t know how to write a cover letter or application letter, not forgetting the Puff and Pass crew. Big ups to ya’ll
Dear Sir/ Madam
APPLICATION FOR HR INTERNSHIP
I am a 4th year student studying towards a Btech degree in Human Resource Development at Vaal University of Technology. I hold a National Diploma in Management of Training with no relevant working experience. I wish to pursue a career in training and development.
My special interest is training and development. I have developed interpersonal skills, conflict resolving skills and communication skills through my studies. I am computer literate, punctual, driven and willing to learn new, exciting and challenging skills. I consider myself a team player as most of assignments in my level are done in groups.
I have enclosed my curriculum vitae and willing to provide any other details that may be needed and can be contacted on my cell phone 078 042 1134 or via email at **********. Should you wish to interview me, I am available every week days from 7:30 am to 17:30 pm.
Yours faithfully
M.S Name Surname
Sorry left out something.
To whom it may concern
I, MyNAME, am applying for the following post as I am the best candidate as found attached in my resume I have done all the required modules at high school and university level. I have been trained by the University of the Orange Free State as a tutor and have been tutoring for the past three years.I obtained my B.Sc degree in Information Technology at the University of the Orange Free State at the end of 2011. I have been an educator at ?????????? for the past 8 months and I am still employed at the institution until the end of December 2012.
I have completed the IQMS at ?????? and my strengths and weakness have been highlighted. I am a fast learner and my communication skills are of the best. I am a computer scientist and my background and/or expertise is in the mathematical field. My skills lie in programming in C sharp, java and Matlab. I can work in Visual Studio and Netbeans or any similar IDE. I can do dynamic web designing in C#. I am also able to develop form applications in both java and C#. I can also do networking and database programming and application designs in SQL server as well as Access if requested of me.
I am sure that I will become an asset to the Institution and not become a liability as my thirst for success drives me. I strive at maintaining the ambition in my veins warm and pumping.
MyNAME
Private
Dear Sir / Madam
I have recently had an opportunity to complete an in-service Training with the City Lodge Group Hotels. I believe with one and half year experience at a Lodge (Elephant Sanctuary). In addition to this I have one year of working and training experience at TOUR VEST INBOUND OPERATION travel agent including and about four years of working experience in and out of the Tourism industry.
I possess the necessary qualification and together with the practical work experience I have amassed thus far, would make a positive and meaningful contribution to your organization. Please find attached my C.V. and qualifications. I am available to start work immediately. Please do not hesitate contacting me at 083 427 1848 / 074 860 1452 for further details.
I wish to extend my gratitude for the opportunity to apply. I look forward to hearing from you.
Best Regards
Sinovuyo
good day
i am looking for a job, learneship or internship, i have N6 National certificates in civil engineering, i am self driven,hard worker, self disipline,up for challenges,Will be able to bring new ideas and i have a ability to come out with solution in most problems.
currenty i have experiance in office administrator in a construction company, my mojar subject was quantity surveyor, building and structural construction, building and structural surveyor and building administrator.
kindly regards
carol
Good day how are you
Application for voluntary work
I have completed and Certified with Microsoft as a SQL Server 2008 Database Administrator with an Microsoft Certified IT Professional qualification as a SQL Server 2008 Business Intelligence Developer. And a NC:IT in Systems Development
I am seeking an opportunity to gain experience and i am willing to join your team and will not require any remuneration in order to so, i can add value to your organisation and i am dedicated to my field, All i need is to gain some Experience and will be of great value to you
Attached is my CV and Certifications For your Consideration
Kind Regards
Veven
Hi m looking for a better job,m young and very passionate,m self-driven.I am intrested in any Retail jobs as I am a cashier,would love 2 hear from any company that is interested.
Using a short-hand or facebook type of writing is never a good idea – always write in full
I am 100% agree with mxolisi , its very vital to wright in full just to improve your vocabulary remember as you applying those people can score you good points just for your proper English , even if you haven’t called for interview.